Hai! :3
Nice poem, but you need to fix your grammar.
Since "deep" is not a full sentence, there would be no period.
This is what you call a 'fragment'.
Other than that, LOVE the poem.
Nice work.
Hai! :3
Nice poem, but you need to fix your grammar.
Since "deep" is not a full sentence, there would be no period.
This is what you call a 'fragment'.
Other than that, LOVE the poem.
Nice work.