I have two room descriptions for this room, and was hoping to get some feedback as to which one more people prefer.
1. Come join Tarzan and his gorilla friends in the thicket of the deep jungle where you can swim, splash, play, or see if you can muster up the courage to jump off the diving platform or dare your friends pluck a hair off an elephant's rear.
2. Jane got separated from her father, Professor Porter and their hunter-guide Clayton and stumbled upon a great place to cool off from the jungle heat. Maybe Tarzan will find her an fall in love with her as she takes a dip.
So what do you think, one or two?
Would love it if people would stop by and visit my room. All feedback/critiques are welcomed and appreciated.
1. Come join Tarzan and his gorilla friends in the thicket of the deep jungle where you can swim, splash, play, or see if you can muster up the courage to jump off the diving platform or dare your friends pluck a hair off an elephant's rear.
2. Jane got separated from her father, Professor Porter and their hunter-guide Clayton and stumbled upon a great place to cool off from the jungle heat. Maybe Tarzan will find her an fall in love with her as she takes a dip.
So what do you think, one or two?
Would love it if people would stop by and visit my room. All feedback/critiques are welcomed and appreciated.
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