My poem.

[taiflower]

Deep.​

 

[Silhouette]

That was actually deep. *snaps*

 

[Hipster]

-tears up- o my

 

[philitup]

Best. Poem. Ever.

 

[Solar]

That poem was deeper than a puddle in a pothole

 

[taiflower]

omg thank you guys it took so long to come up with this. xD

 

[Drewby]

ily

 

[taiflower]

That poem was deeper than a puddle in a pothole

Still dying tbh

 

[misterwives]

Hai! :3
Nice poem, but you need to fix your grammar.
Since "deep" is not a full sentence, there would be no period.
This is what you call a 'fragment'.
Other than that, LOVE the poem.
Nice work.

 

[taiflower]

Hai! :3
Nice poem, but you need to fix your grammar.
Since "deep" is not a full sentence, there would be no period.
This is what you call a 'fragment'.
Other than that, LOVE the poem.
Nice work.

-claps- great thank you so much for the info...It's not like I'm getting an A in literature but thanks XD

 

[misterwives]

-claps- great thank you so much for the info...It's not like I'm getting an A in literature but thanks XD

LOL
I was just trying to be a smart-buttt (;

 

[taiflower]

LOL
I was just trying to be a smart-buttt (;

I know <3 XD