VERY rough draft of what I'm making!

[Markeh]

I've been working on some logos for MVMK, and this is my few ideas so far- Not really sure where I'm going with it! I've been throwing the idea around of fan art, or maybe submitting some work, but Suggestions with what to do, again.. ROUGH DRAFT
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[Jasmine]

I think the second is really good. My only suggestion would be to save it in a file format with better quality (such .png).

For the first one, I personally just hate the Times New Roman font. I don't really like the gradient background or the 'M's' being cut off in the top left corner either.

Anyway, so that's why I like the second one best.

 

[Markeh]

PNG was too big for forums, thats why it was in JPG and thanks! Constructive Criticism

 

[CattyCait]

I prefer the second one as well. My favorite by far.

 

[Shrimp]

You have some nice drafts, I wonder what you're trying to do with the first one, it seems to have a lot of empty space. The "My Virtual Magic Kingdom" looks very stuck together, I'm sure that'll be better when you use a bigger scale.

I like the font you used for "Virtual Magic Kingdom" on the last picture.

 

[BadWolf]

I like the second one.

 

[Tyler]

I like the second one most as well, though I really don't think we should change the logo at all.

 

[Markeh]

Thank all And It's mostly for a secret project I'm working on.

 

[Kay.D]

i like the second one the best, but you can barely see the "my" part. i would definitely work with that one though!

 

[Valkyrie]

I prefer the second one, It's very good! But the 'my' part needs to be seen better.

 

[StormDogs]

I agree, the second is the best one. The other two have just a tad too much empty space. If you put the castle and the 'my' in the last one I may like the last one better